dobio sam na faxu neki dio knjige da prevedem sa engleskog, uspio sam skoro sve, ali ima nekoliko recenica koje ne mogu nikako.  ako moze neko da pomogne bio bih veoma zahvalan:

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(da ne navodim ovu recenicu, jer je pravo duga, uglavnom kaze da je Boljsevizam od socijalističkih revolucionara preuzeo air of fastidious moral severity.) But fastidiousness in Lenin's movements gave way instantly to the cult of the indiscriminate.
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The old-fashioned insistence on distinguishing between the guilty and the innocent, the
earnest recognition that even the most justified of violent acts may be morally
culpable, the scrupulous custom of examining one's own motives - all of that, the
mental habits of the world around Kaliayev "the Poet", was dismissed as the sentimental
legacy of a hypocritical past.
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It was an emotional forcefulness that derived, ultimately, from the movement's cheerful
willingness to put Bolshevism's enemies to death, and an equally cheerful willingness
to put to death random crowds whose views on Bolshevism were utterly unknown, and a further
willingness to put to death the Bolsheviks themselves (no one has ever murdered more
Communists than the Communist Party of the Soviet Union), and a willingness to accept
one's own death, too - all for the best of reasons. The idea was, in Baudelaire's phrase,
to whip and kill people for the good of the people. And the whipping and killing got underway.
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Mussolini's movement was noisily Italian.
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...reading the same mandated texts...
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Jel samo ovo sto je bold ili sve?

pa to sto je bold me bas najvise handri; naravno da bi mi najdraze bilo kad bi neko komplet recenice preveo, al ako nista onda makar boldirano. svaka vid pomoci je dobrodosao. 

boljsevizam ti je ,pasha moj,preuzeo dah izbirljive moralne jacine,predstroznosti,zavisi u kom je kontekstu...itd itd
ja ti to mogu prevesti,ali sad nemam vremena,jedino ako ti nije frka da to veceras uradim?
jer manijak ne moze bit' svak'....

hehe, to kraljice, Zeljo sampion! 
ma jok ba nije mi hica za ovo, moram to do iduce hefte predat, pa eto kad budes imala vremena... fala ti puno 

air of fastidious moral severity.) But fastidiousness in Lenin's movements gave way instantly to the cult of the indiscriminate.
Atmosfera prečiste moralne strogosti.  Ali čistunstvo u Lenjinovom pokretu dalo je mogućnost da se razvije kult koji ne pravi razliku.  (Ne znam u kom kontekstu je ta rečenica, ali ti znaš pa uklopi sa svojim radom)
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The old-fashioned insistence on distinguishing between the guilty and the innocent, the
earnest recognition that even the most justified of violent acts may be morally
culpable, the scrupulous custom of examining one's own motives - all of that, the
mental habits of the world around Kaliayev "the Poet", was dismissed as the sentimental
legacy of a hypocritical past.
Staromodno insistiranje na razlikovanju krivih od nevinih, iskreno preiznanje da čak i najopravdaniji čin nasilja može da podleže moralnoj krivičnoj odgovornosti, skurpulozni običaj da se ispituju nečiji motivi - sve to, mentalna navika sveta oko Kaliajevog "Pesnika" odbačena je kao sentimentalna baština licemerne prošlosti.
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It was an emotional forcefulness that derived, ultimately, from the movement's cheerful
willingness to put Bolshevism's enemies to death, and an equally cheerful willingness
to put to death random crowds whose views on Bolshevism were utterly unknown, and a further
willingness to put to death the Bolsheviks themselves (no one has ever murdered more
Communists than the Communist Party of the Soviet Union), and a willingness to accept
one's own death, too - all for the best of reasons. The idea was, in Baudelaire's phrase,
to whip and kill people for the good of the people. And the whipping and killing got underway.

Emotivna prisila je bila krajnji rezultat radosne spremnosti Lenjinovog pokreta da usmrti protivnike boljševizma, kao i jednako radosna spremnost da usmrti slučajne mase ljudi čiji pogled na boljševizam uopšte nije bio poznat, kao i dalja spremnost da usmrti i same Boljševike (niko nije usmrtio više komunista od same Komunističke partije Sovjetskog Saveza) i spremnost da prihvati i svoju vlastitu smrt - sve zarad najboljih mogućih razloga.  Ideja je bila, kako je to Budaler formulisao, bičevatii i pobiti ljude zarad opšteg dobra naroda.  Tako je i došlo do bičevanja i ubijanja.
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Mussolini's movement was noisily Italian.
Musolinijev pokret bio je izrazito italijanski po svojoj prirodi (ovo ti je idejno značenje rečenice, jer bukvalan prevod ne bi ti ništa značio).
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...reading the same mandated texts...
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